* Writing- The writing was the most important part of the magazine. I think my writing was okay, it would've been better. But I liked the process I went through to get my final written draft. I first started off with a photo essay and I was going to revise that then input that to the Ampersand magazine, But after a few critiques I started to dislike my own writing. I felt like it didn't fit in with our magazine and it wasn't a professional piece of writing.I then wrote a whole new article reflecting on my experience at internship & how it's a great experience for high school students. I brought this article in and got it critiqued a few times. I felt much more better about this article. I also learned so much during the process. There was a lot of methods our teacher taught, that I incorporated into my article.
* Editing/* Drafting & Revision- During the editing/critiquing process I learned so much about writing a paper. I used most of the methods our teacher taught us. In between critiques I noticed something I do a lot in my writing and that's writing my sentences extra long with unnecessary words. Some times I will use words in a sentence that do not need to be there. I noticed this after my first critique, when I got my paper back I felt kind of dumb. Because there would be like 5 words crossed out and substituted with 1 or 2 words, which I think made my article way better.So I went through my article trying to find more possible way to make my sentences shorter.
* Layout & Design- I didn't focus much on my layout/design.
* Photography-
* Creativity & Originality
* The printing & publishing process & industry
* Your own thoughts about your path beyond 11th grade (and beyond HTHMA... that's what internship is about, right?)
What did you learn?
How did you learn in?
Why is this important?
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